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[Crowned Pheonix]

I really like the ideas here, especially that metallic wub that happens from time to time, but there's still a few problems with this. It's kind of structureless, and that feeling isn't great. Don't get me wrong, it's great to have variation and variety, but there's just a bit too much here in terms of song sections (not necessarily ideas/sounds/melodies). Maybe structure it so that there's two big sections, each of which gradually build and are noticeably different? I dunno. But just make sure that the listener isn't too lost. :)

BlockGhost responds:

I outed to make this a very "lost" track, or confusing in a way. But I still have very much to learn. Thanks kind person on the internet.

[BlackNeth - Cutted Arms]

You sound like you're in that odd stage where you're not a noob, but you're not exactly a pro either. I'm there too. At this point, it's more useful to develop good habits than much else. I suggest that you plan out a week or two, and make yourself do certain things. Develop some beneficial habits. Make this whole thing a little more regimented, like, work harder on songs on the weekends, or even make 1 song per weekend. Then, maybe during the week, you could be generating new ideas and just saving them in a different spot than you usually save full songs, or you could do sound designing sessions where you could make your own samples for drums and wobs and stuff like Virtual Riot. Or, you could totally reverse the timing - do sound design on the weekends, and make songs during the week. It doesn't totally matter. (If the initial system is flawed, the crap will just work itself out.) Just keep in mind that whatever schedule you make has to fit in with the rest of your life. xD

It's totally up to you, but something has to happen in order for you to fully transform from noob to pro. :)

You can check out this article for more info on this sort of stuff: https://www.edmprod.com/5-stages-electronic-music-producer/

McLain1998 responds:

thank you very much means a lot to me :)

[wubbaduck-Monsta (Fairydust Remake)]

It's decently accurate, but the drops have a lot of noise. I hear some cheering in the noise, so I think you just had some background FX too loud. If you want to just do a quick check that everything is at a decent volume, you can export the audio and listen to it like that. I find that anything wrong with volume becomes more noticeable that way.

Secondly, you probably ought to capitalize Wubbaduck. It's a little thing, but if you don't have something like a name capitalized, it doesn't look very professional.

Other than that, it's quite an accurate remake.

FairydustOfficial responds:

this so old :) Im are more good now ;v

[DA TING GOES SKRAAA [Killer-FX Dubstep Remix] - Big Shaq]

Well right off the bat, it swears in the second drop, so -1* from me. Other than that, this is freaking awesome! It's kind of repetitive, but it's still got that awesome energy that I don't know how to get in my music... :/

Pretty awesome.

[Swaggadelic Phenomenons]

This is really cool and weird in its own way. I really like it! I might want to remix this sometime...